The Internet
Aesthetics:
level 2
- Could have been more to it
- Some pics were grainy
- Very plain
- Image quality was poor
- Colourful images
Level 3
- Professional
Creativity:
Level 2
- Just images and text, could have done with clips
- Not very much went in to the production
- Creative with text, however all images were secondary
- Needed more creativity
Level 3
- Good mix of pictures and text
- Statistics
Technology:
Level 2
- No videos, could have been more creative
- No camera use
- Premiere pro used well
- Good use
- More effects and transitions
Understanding:
level 2
- Main points come across unclear
- Shows what the internet is used for, not very clear and structured
Level 3
- Showed good understanding
- Great statistics and theory
- A lot of knowledge clear understanding
Product Values:
Level 2
- Pictures were blurry, good music
- Was unprofessional
- Use better quality pictures
- More color
Overall after looking at the feedback that was given to me, i have found out that i need to spend more time on the work e.g. getting better images, more information and structure the information appropriately. However, the feedback also showed that there were some good points, such as the choice of music that was added on and some of the statistics were very good.
WWW: good use of music and good understanding of the work.
EBI: need more effort to be put in to the work.
